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Chapter 9 The Revelation

eggodwin1
Aug 24
3 min read

This was the end. The bus had stopped. The survivors—those who could still move—had already scrambled off. John watched them through blurry, blood-filled eyes. He wanted to go after them, to finish what he started, to scream the truth he believed.

But his body wouldn't move. He was done.

That last outburst—that final violent convulsion—had taken everything he had left. It was the addict's last surge of strength, the final desperate push to force the world to bend to the lie.

It wasn't just rage.

It was the last war between his body and his mind.

Between right and wrong.

Reality and delusion.

Truth and death.

     He slumped to the floor of the bus.

And then, faintly—voices.

"Freeze! Don't move!"

Two officers, guns drawn, entered the bus cautiously.

They'd seen this before.

"Another right head," one muttered, eyes scanning the blood-soaked aisle. "Too many this week."

The other officer knelt beside the body, weapon still raised.

"This is getting worse," the first said, glancing around at the carnage. "We can wait. But it's not over."

The second officer turned.

"What do you mean?"

     John lay on the floor of the bus, gasping.

His body was broken. His face was pale. The blood around him was thick and still warm.

Then—boots on metal.

Another man stepped onto the bus.

Not a cop. Not a medic. The specialist.

     He was one of a special unit that was assigned to cases involving those infected by the denial bug. The Rightheads as they were called by some. He moved calmly, speaking briefly to the officers on the scene. They nodded and stepped aside.The specialist approached John slowly.Kneeling beside him, he spoke gently. You still have a chance," he said. "You can bring peace to your soul. You can begin to reverse the damage… but you have to tell a different kind of lie."

John didn't respond. His eyes twitched. His jaw trembled.

The specialist continued.

"A lie that helps someone. A lie that gives—not takes. One with moral weight. One that lifts, rather than wounds."

John stared, hollow and confused.

"Think of someone you can help," the man urged. "Anyone. A stranger. A child. A version of yourself. One sentence. One lie that isn't about you."

John's eyes flickered.

He was searching.

Digging.

Reaching into the ruins of his mind for something that wasn't tainted by blame, or anger, or fear.

     His mouth opened slightly. No words came.

The specialist saw the struggle. He'd seen it before. In earlier stages of the infection, this method sometimes worked. Sometimes there was still space in the soul for connection—for empathy.

But looking at John's face now, the specialist wasn't sure.

Still, he leaned in.

"Try," he whispered. "Just try."

John's lips parted.

A breath escaped.

But the words never formed.

His eyes drifted back, glassy. His chest rose once… and stilled. The silence returned as he tried desperately to hold on to life.

The specialist closed his eyes for a moment, saddened by the knowledge that he was going to lose this one. He stood, gave a nod to the officers to show he was finished, and walked away.

     The officers stood over what remained of John.

One shook his head. The younger one looked pale.

"You're new at this," the older officer said. "But you'll learn. It's the revelation."

The younger officer turned. "What do you mean?"

"Right before they die," he said, "they get it. They see. Just for a second. The lies lose their grip. The truth pushes through like a scream from inside."

"A scream?"

"It's their conscience. What's left of it. It tries to come back. But it's too late."

The older cop crouched beside John’s folded body, indicating he was in pain.

"You see, there's no room. The lie's been living up there too long. Feeding. Growing. By the time the truth shows up, there's no space left for it to live."

He stood slowly, brushing his hands against his pants.

"When it gets too congested…"

That's when John screamed.

A raw, broken yell—like something ripping loose from the center of his chest.

Then silence.

Then a smile.

Wide. Peaceful. Almost grateful.

Then—pop.

A wet sound. A spray of red.

His head burst like a blister.

The officers didn't flinch.

They just called it in.

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